Tris Pedrad Dauntless Born

Tris Pedrad Dauntless Born

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jojo9635 By jojo9635 Completed

Tris was born in Dauntless and along with her twin Uriah and her big brother Zeke they mess up the daunless compound. 
But what happens when a blue eyed abnegation boy shows up?


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This story is complete

  • dauntlessborn
  • divergent
  • fourtris
  • trispedrad
  • trisprior
Can I give you some constructive criticism?? 
                              
                              Use paragraphs 
                              
                              TiPToP 
                              
                              Ti- time 
                              
                              P-place
                              
                              To-topic
                              
                              P-person 
                              
                              But I really like the story line x
ManahilMatin ManahilMatin Aug 01, 2017
First when I read this, I was like 'you ship Uris!? 
                              
                              Then I was like 'no, it is supposed to be Uri's.'
Killa-trymebih Killa-trymebih May 01, 2016
Oh your german that explain s the reason why tris called her mother mum instead that was a helpful tip
-wakanduhs -wakanduhs Feb 19, 2017
I have a butter knife ready....does anyone know where this "Johnny" is?