Racing with Love

Racing with Love

2.1K Reads 63 Votes 9 Part Story
Taylor or Tay By tay2396 Updated Sep 14, 2013

Blair lives a life of happiness. Must I also mention, she lives on a ranch, training race horses to run their hearts out, do what they are bred to do. When a well known jockey enrolls in her school, it becomes a love triangle. The city boy, Ross, knows he has feelings for her, just never found the strength to mention it. When Blair begins to fall for Austin, what will Ross do to win her over?

  • beach
  • boys
  • comedy
  • highschool
  • horse
  • kiss
  • love
  • ranch
  • school
heartburningwithfire heartburningwithfire Feb 04, 2012
@tay2396 Oh shoot I forgot to put your story on me reading list >.< haha
tay2396 tay2396 Feb 04, 2012
@heartburningwithfire Yeah, I'll have to proof read after I get it all done. Thanks, I'll fix that now (:
heartburningwithfire heartburningwithfire Feb 04, 2012
This chapter really captured me into your story. Going on to find out who is this Austin.. Just a slight advice but some of your sentences don't flow smoothly while reading.. And the first paragraph you put stamped away I think you mean stomped away... Correct me if I am wrong....
percussionluvr percussionluvr Feb 04, 2012
Good beginning! I love the dialogue between your characters! I also really like your first sentece it is just perfec to grab a readers attention and make them want to read more!
skylithorizon skylithorizon Feb 04, 2012
This is really good and I honestly think that this could go far ! (:  I think it's cute how he hides his feelings with being mean C: voted!
Friday13thx3 Friday13thx3 Jan 29, 2012
I like this so far! It draws the reader in and you do a good job of descriptions and characters! Keep posting! :D