The Darkness Of Love

The Darkness Of Love

933 Reads 38 Votes 7 Part Story
Emily By Crazylilchinadoll Updated Jun 03, 2015

Latonya Rink wakes up, alone, scared and without memory. As the memories start to flood back so does the horror of the boy. Trapped in the middle of the woods all she can do is keep running and try to piece together what was stolen from her. With time running out she needs to figure out how to stop him before he finds her.

HeyYouRedhead HeyYouRedhead Jul 17, 2012
This is really a cool beginning to a story, you need some major editing though, which I'd be happy to help you with if you like. Really, though, for the most part you could just run it through a word processor or pages and it would point out the really glaring stuff.
LightOfTheTruth LightOfTheTruth Sep 26, 2011
Hey welcome to wattpad, this is really good for your first story. You had me interested from the begining. Thumbs up :L Voted.
Chemalotte Chemalotte Sep 26, 2011
@Crazylilchinadoll Hmmm...Okay the last paragraph is too long for a computer screen, (Tires out the eyes.) Half it. and ... and I think that's it. Well arent you thorough. I shall go to chap 2 and see if there's anything there.
Crazylilchinadoll Crazylilchinadoll Sep 26, 2011
@Chemalotte thanks :d do u think theres anything that needs adjusting NEED ADVICE HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3
Crazylilchinadoll Crazylilchinadoll Sep 25, 2011
@WritingIsAPassion i cant seem to spell lol i started writing this when with u
Crazylilchinadoll Crazylilchinadoll Sep 25, 2011
@WritingIsAPassion i starte writinths when i was with u dear