"This is how you quote dialogue. Not with parentheses." She stated. "You also need a lot of work with grammar and complete sentences." The girl said "where's the plot and this is far from a Natsu x Reader"
you should use (Y/N) for the name sweetie. and when they are talking, use " around it.
like for example,
"Hi! I'm Natsu!"
I think this is funny. I was laughing the whole time.
Buuut, yeah. You didn't do your dialogue right. And I wouldn't count this as a Natsu x Reader.
I'm not trying to be rude. 😊😊
1 thats not how you do dialogue 2 this is so far from a natsu x reader lile dude