I wrote this a while ago. It's basically about a woman who loses control of her emotions.
I like it! I'm not a poetry writer myself, I like to read poems but I can't write it to save my life. I like this particulary because of how dark it is. Beautifully done. Great job! :)
@RomeAngel aw thanks :) I'm glad you liked it though, and your work was really good!!
This is amazing! You can really feel all the emotion and the conflict the character goes through! Great job:)
So much emotion is packed into this beautiful poem you have a gift use it well :) x
@michelle94 ahaha, thanks. i used to write a lot of poetry, but not so much now :(
@midnight-disaster haha awwh tanks well this peom of urs is reli good you should write more :)