In The Hall Of The Mountain King (on temporary hold)

In The Hall Of The Mountain King (on temporary hold)

754 Reads 19 Votes 10 Part Story
Pas By ilovedracotoomuch Completed

Sebastian Zachariassen is a unhappy 8 year old who wants nothing more than a friend. He constantly wishes for one friend that he could play with, write with, be buddies with. One day, a new boy moves into his class and shows him a cave up in the snowy parts of Norway. But can Sebastian really trust this "friend"? Or is the friend really karma getting revenge on him for saying all those mean things about those boys who always teased him? And who lives in that cave that the new boy shows him?

(set in 1926, Norway, and written through diary entries)

  • king
  • mountain
  • norway
life-of-words life-of-words Nov 20, 2011
His poems always make me laugh. Good job on this too. Your character has a very unique voice that lets us get to know him quickly. Well done.
life-of-words life-of-words Nov 20, 2011
This is kind of endearing. He seems really cute. I love how you made it historical, but also included details that we all can relate to. Great job.
ilovedracotoomuch ilovedracotoomuch Nov 20, 2011
@Ferretlp i know its sounds misleading but the story will start to revolve around a cave up in norway where the mountain king lives. I'm sorry if i did mislead you
ilovedracotoomuch ilovedracotoomuch Oct 22, 2011
@TiGurl24 it was never in norwegian i just made it seem authentic like that
ilovedracotoomuch ilovedracotoomuch Sep 25, 2011
@MissGisele oh thanks :) I'm going to finish this story on halloween and upload everyday!