This Way to Dreamland

This Way to Dreamland

250 Reads 13 Votes 6 Part Story
XAires By XAires Updated Jul 10, 2012

When Alexandra Clearton (Alex) was 14 her best friend Ashton Kolser disappeared. Where exactly did he go?Well she's about to find out but what happens she's thrown into a world that's too good for her. What happens when she's not allowed to leave?

  • dream
  • fantasy
  • friends
  • love
  • romance
XAires XAires Sep 28, 2011
@Hope-Adon Thanx! I was mostly thinking what i would do. Thnx for commenting, if you have many suggestions, feel free to message me!
Hope-Adon Hope-Adon Sep 27, 2011
Sweet story, I like her childlike reaction of grabbing his face to memorize it. If she was older, this action would seem weird, since she should be asking questions like, where are you going, how can you just leave everything, etc. But since she's young, it kind of fits. Great start!
XAires XAires Sep 26, 2011
@ciarant Thanx and if u have any suggestions plz do message me.
XAires XAires Sep 26, 2011
@-LilyMae- Thnx I'm workin on the chapters and i knoe about the details but i just really wanted to get this story out there! Thx for commenting!
irissuave irissuave Sep 25, 2011
Good start! It catches the reader's attention. Love the cover btw