Life of pain

Life of pain

4.8K Reads 113 Votes 23 Part Story
Gabi By gabismile Completed

This is not another love story. Girl falls for a player, he changes and loves only her and they live happily ever after. No. This is a story about Elisa who moves to a new town and has to start a new life here. Everything seems great in the beginning but what she doesn't know is how cruel people are in this town. She meets Lucy, who makes her life everything but simple. So no, this is not another happily ever after love story. This is a story that follows Elisa through her life. Life that doesn't seem to have anything good for her in plan. But will Elisa manage to fight through everything and find her happy ending?

theordinaryoddity theordinaryoddity Jan 16, 2012
I love how you said that this story is not a cliche love story! Thank you! Haha there are people like this. I love non-typical stories! This sounds like an amazing story! Ok reading further on! :D
Shuneez Shuneez Dec 29, 2011
Thoughtful and has emotion to it. Very well done....enough to give you a vote, but improve more, and my vote is yours. ;)
gabismile gabismile Dec 23, 2011
@TakiraMaine: I understand and I appreciate your advice, but this story isn't really about her memory loss. It's about all of the things that happened to her that made her lose her memory. There won't be a lot of parts where she has amnesia, that's just a small part of the story.
TakiraMaine TakiraMaine Dec 23, 2011
I understand were your coming from with this story and all but try to make it your own add things that might not be very likely to happen I say this because a lot of people are making stories similar to having lose of memory so make it yours other than that so far so good!
Jamie_Robyn Jamie_Robyn Oct 10, 2011
wow! a very intriguing beginning! it really makes me want to read more of it! :)
Neo200120018 Neo200120018 Oct 06, 2011
Sorry my net died stupid vodafone back to ur story its was great emotional story ppl like that shouldn't have children!