To Love Is To Destroy

To Love Is To Destroy

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izastasiasteele By IzaRodriguez Updated Oct 21, 2011

I'm sure you all know what a one-sided love is. If not try googling it. :) Anyways, I'm not really good at summaries but I'll try my best.

Nathan or Nate as Nataleigh call him has been friends since childhood. What Nataleigh doesn't know is since then Nate has always loved her.

But what if she doesn't love him back? What if you gave your all but it just wasn't enough? Why feel jealousy when you don't  love him the same way he does? Why regret losing him but when he was there you barely notice him? In the end, big choices are made. Risks are done. But then, risking things don't really turn out well most of the time. In the end, maybe to love is to destroy.

  • brother
  • family
  • friends
  • love
  • school
  • sister
IzaRodriguez IzaRodriguez Sep 26, 2011
@littlemissfizzter535 yup! made it the cover now! thanks again!
ForeverFrankie ForeverFrankie Sep 26, 2011
oh hey, I made a cover for you hope you like? just click on link or copy and paste;D
                              http://i920.photobucket.com/albums/ad44/DrFizzter/toloveistodestroy.jpg
ForeverFrankie ForeverFrankie Sep 26, 2011
@IzaRodriguez It's okay, anything to help, hope I've helped transform your writing and make it EVEN better!
IzaRodriguez IzaRodriguez Sep 26, 2011
@littlemissfizzter535 ahh.. no worries. i got it. thanks much! though im not sure i improved in the next chapter. but still ill keep your advice for future use and for the next chapter. thanks again!
ForeverFrankie ForeverFrankie Sep 26, 2011
@IzaRodriguez You've got to sort of like explain the person's feelings, what they see in the other person's reaction, facial expressions, physical gestures you know what I mean? This can be done really effectively by using strong adjectives! ;)
IzaRodriguez IzaRodriguez Sep 26, 2011
@littlemissfizzter535 uhmm.. can i ask what you mean exactly by "to make a good dialogue, you have to describe the atmosphere and sort of set up the mood and situation" :) im planning to continue the next chapter today. thanks!