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Pretty Boy In Disguise

Pretty Boy In Disguise

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Fayre Meira By FayreMeira Updated Jan 23, 2013

Kyle Matthews has a face so beautiful its become a curse to him - especially with what has happened in his past. He's now moved to Penny Green's school, camouflaging himself as a certified geek so no girl would ever throw herself at him again. Penny herself has sworn off any man with a gorgeous facade, having her heart broken by her best friend who cheated on her with her arch-enemy, her cousin, Victoria. The two meet and fall in love, but what happens when Penny finally finds Kyle out? Would she risk her heart again? While Kyle needs her desperately to save him?

I previously published this story in, under the name Amaryllis Faye/Fayre Meira (url:, under the title 'After The Fog Clears'.  I've been having a major writer's block and am re-posting it here in the hopes of getting criticisms and inspirations from new readers.  Thanks for your time in reading my story and drop by your comments!

Wistfull Wistfull Jul 14, 2014
This is confusing me. Is his mam Danielle? And who's his dad? It would be better to just call them mam and dad instead of switching between that and their names.
kathadoodle kathadoodle Dec 11, 2012
Loved this story from fictionpress, I'm so glad you posted it here too!
Gravediggerix Gravediggerix Nov 02, 2010
Wow. The Jessika and Tommy part... Like...who talks that much during sex?   
                                        I like you're writing though. Some parts are a bit "american teen movie" over it, but it's still good. 
                              If Kyle was real he'd be mine ;)