The Twists And Turns Of Marrying Elise

The Twists And Turns Of Marrying Elise

4 Part Story 1.9K Reads 81 Votes
Cher By aBitParanoid Updated Oct 19, 2011

All Jared wants is to regain his place in the family after running away and losing everything - but it's not as easy as he'd hoped. Jared hates his rich father, who is always trying to make his life miserable, but wants to prove himself to be better than the stupid, reckless boy he was four years ago. But his father is not making that easy. When a business partner comes to visit, Jared's father arranges a marriage between Jared and his friend's daughter, causing Jared's plan to crash and burn. Will Jared's father have victory, or will this girl prove to not be so bad after all?

mindthegap1 mindthegap1 Jan 02, 2012 04:22PM
how the hell did you manage me to feel upset after reading the PROLOUGE?
x_abbie x_abbie Oct 24, 2011 08:25PM
Wooah, this has got me hooked already! its very interesting!
purplecursor purplecursor Oct 24, 2011 02:12PM
Crap I hate it when the protagonist's counterpart dies. I'm curious of where you will go from this.
                              
                              Nostalgia, sadness where some of the emotions that I felt when i was reading this.
                              
                              The carving of their names was a great addition. It made my insides all fuzzy.
Danielleisms Danielleisms Oct 24, 2011 12:24PM
Aww its so sweet, I wanted to cry. I wonder what happened? Anyway I guess I'll be reading more to find out
RainbowBerry RainbowBerry Oct 24, 2011 05:03AM
This is beauituflly written. I'm being honest, you are the first wattpad writer that has written with such grace. Thanks for sending me the link to this story, It really is a piece of writing. x)
MarindaBernard MarindaBernard Oct 24, 2011 04:48AM
I really love the way this is written. Its melancholy, it makes me feel sad when i read it, also very good language when expressing his emotions