Kidnapped? (Harry Styles)

Kidnapped? (Harry Styles)

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sofeeyah By SophieKarim Completed

[completed] ✓ ~ "Now that you're here, You are not going anywhere until I say so"

It was those words I knew would lead me to danger. It was those words I knew that would lead me to a place where there is no escape. Millions of remorses ran inside of me. He'll make me work for him. He might even try and kill me one of these days. A unusual feeling ran through me. Maybe he might let me go. He might give me my freedom back. But I knew the opposite was going to happen when I found out he was a vampire. . . 

It was obvious that he was going to keep me until he gets the chance to kill me. But if he was to fall in love with me, the only way out would be love. . . wouldn't it?


AU Short Story

My school makes us go for eight hours and eleven if we do a sport!
*holds Sophie's hands and looks in her eyes*
                              Don't worry sweetie, i will gladly vote and comment
xXxBroken_DreamerxXx xXxBroken_DreamerxXx Jan 12, 2014
I liked it (: but I found several times where switched tenses, so be sure to go back and edit. I felt like it was a lot of telling and didn't flow too well. but I did find the plot intriguing and I love the cover, so points for that :p good job! x
SophieKarim SophieKarim May 28, 2013
@i_luvzayn I'll only update this when it gets a few more comments/votes. Please share it out with your followers maybe? And Thank you :)
i_luvzayn i_luvzayn May 27, 2013
Omg I love this already:) Xx this sounds like its going to be an awesome story keep it up, love :D Xx btw Harry seems so hdjfjd in this story I have no words... Update soon Xx