The Marine And Her Wolf

The Marine And Her Wolf

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X-wild-wolf-X By X-wild-wolf-X Updated Sep 20

Luna lost her daddy at the young age of 10 he was a united state marine LT
  After the los of her dad her mom re marryd a real basterd after 6 years of bieng ignored by her drunk mom and abused by her stepdad she ran away and got into the US marine youth corp with the help of an old army buddy of her dad who took her under his wing
  Now years later she is 24 and the bests female LT of her squad 
  After 7 tours in Irak and Afghanistan she is back in the USA after surviving a ambush but wors is yet to come as she is hunted by old enemy's and meets new people along her way and am mistery man who claimes her as HIS

  • alpha
  • mates
  • military
  • war
  • werewolf
No offense but please work on your grammar and writing skills.
Dianne14122 Dianne14122 Oct 05
Not trying to be rude. But your need to capitalize and edit, it is basic writing skills. Great story so far though
Please don't take offense to this, but with so many errors, is English your second language by any chance?
Wizhawk Wizhawk Oct 05
You say Marine. Then you say army. Which is it. There is a world of difference.
JT5234 JT5234 Oct 07, 2016
I love it. The.punctuation get a little confusing but it's pretty good.
sacleveland sacleveland Dec 31, 2016
That's when you see the truth in what's happing. When you see the soldier fighting. Surviving. For once you welcome the pain. It will all disappear.
                              -My uncle officer Cleveland US army.