The Marine And Her Wolf

The Marine And Her Wolf

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X-wild-wolf-X By X-wild-wolf-X Updated Nov 27

Luna lost her daddy at the young age of 10 he was a united state marine LT
  After the los of her dad her mom re marryd a real basterd after 6 years of bieng ignored by her drunk mom and abused by her stepdad she ran away and got into the US marine youth corp with the help of an old army buddy of her dad who took her under his wing
  Now years later she is 24 and the bests female LT of her squad 
  After 7 tours in Irak and Afghanistan she is back in the USA after surviving a ambush but wors is yet to come as she is hunted by old enemy's and meets new people along her way and am mistery man who claimes her as HIS

JT5234 JT5234 Oct 07
I love it. The.punctuation get a little confusing but it's pretty good.
ya i know i stil have to edite it and stuff but i have to take care of a 3 year old kid while i write my story so im going to edit it whene i have more time or the story is done i dont know yet but il start working on it thanks by the way
Kenndray Kenndray Jul 06
Hey, the idea is awesome! But yeah try to use dots to show where the sentence end. I think how you tell the story is a bit flat, because you tell it like you are standing next to them. Thats not my thing but I will read the next chapters because this idea is so awesome!
Just from his i am crying poor Luna that sick sick bastard hurt her
thanks hope you like the rest of the book just as much lol ;p
Anticonform Anticonform Aug 23
I like it, but you need to work on your spelling, it's killing me.😧