Please, Don't Go!

Please, Don't Go!

11.7K Reads 189 Votes 16 Part Story
MMP810 By MMP810 Completed

13 year old girl, Isabelle, is best friends with her 19 year old brother, Jeremy. But when Jeremy has to go back to Iraq to fight in the war she is so upset and overwhelmed. Now that he left it’s just her and her mother because her father passed away from cancer a few years ago. Isabelle now has to go through 8th grade with so many questions that she wants to ask her brother, but she can’t wait 3 weeks for him to send replies. So when Isabelle and her mom find out that Jeremy is coming home for Christmas they are very excited! Also inside all this excitement, they find some very depressing news.

LTHughes LTHughes Jan 19, 2011
And I read the discription I think he's dead this is sooooo sad=(
LTHughes LTHughes Jan 19, 2011
This story is amazing I love it=D I'll go and read ure other story thenen go and read the other person who asked me story. Then come back to this one=D
Rachy_3009 Rachy_3009 Jan 02, 2011
Think the is brilliant had to read to the end but I hope that isn't the end. Is he or isn't he? That's what I keep asking myself. Real good read. X
iAdorable iAdorable Nov 27, 2010
This is really interesting, you kept me intrigued can't wait to read the next part!! :D VOTED! 
MMP810 MMP810 Nov 01, 2010
@taraniamh thanks so much for commenting! i'm in the process of writing Chapter 3!!
MMP810 MMP810 Nov 01, 2010
@taraniamh hahah okay and thanks you can vote too you know! haha