The Bad Boy Stole My Diary

The Bad Boy Stole My Diary

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Emma! By milkshake231 Updated Nov 15

17 year old Lennon thought she had high school all figured out. Wake up, go to school, come home, do homework, eat dinner, watch Netflix, and repeat again. That was until the high school's resident  bad boy moved next door. 
  
  Flynn Davis' world was turned upside down when his parents got a divorce,his dad moved to the other side of the country, and left him with his mom. When his mom decides they need a new start, she moves their family to the other side of town to a smaller house.
  
  When the bad boy finds the good girl's diary, nothing good can come out of it, Right?
  
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  I will try to update this story as often as possible. It has no set schedule, because I am pretty busy with school work.
  
   If you are interested in editing this story, message me!
  
  If you make a cover, please email it to me at emrockandroll@gmail.com, and I will dedicate a chapter to you!
  
  I would like to give a big thanks to @LizStyles_ for making me this beautiful cover! I love it!
  
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  Please Vote and Comment! Thanks!
  
  -Emma <3

If this is too predictable I'll scream for that clichés are my enemy. But if you take me by surprise somewhere here, I shall love you forever.
mad4hats mad4hats Mar 26
Nice story. Love the way u have started but I felt like it flows so quickly that the read does not get the proper time to welcome the characters and understand them. If u could add more description with some more dialogues this will not be a problem.
Have you ever read Not All Blonds Do Back Flips? The names Lennon and Flynn sound familiar...
PLEASE TELL ME LENNON IS PLAYED MY SOPHIA FROM YOUNG & HUNGRY!! SHE IS MY FAVORITE CHARACTER
I've read many bad-boy kind of stories but I have yet to see one with this sort of plot :) It's an interesting twist with the whole diary concept! Can't wait to see what you have in store :)
I really love your characterisation - I already feel like I know Lennon! Only a few grammatical errors that I spotted - mainly capitalising words which should not be e.g. 'today' rather than 'Today'. But these are tiny tiny errors, overall really great job!! xx