Altruis

Altruis

2.6K Reads 135 Votes 8 Part Story
Somnos By Somnos Updated Jul 30, 2012

Nothing else will be done with this story, it has evolved into Amathis.

Altruis is an unusual dwarf who spends too much time in the library for his father's liking, who just happens to be the king. Altruis is an outcast who doesn't resemble the rest of the royal family in both his appearance and his demeanor. He is supposed to act like a member of the royal family, but he is much happier to read the old legends and tales of past warriors and heroes, rather than learn to become king or some other dignitary. His life changes dramatically when an old friend returns to Altruis' life, and when mysterious events start to affect Altruis' life.

ScarletClarke ScarletClarke Jul 31, 2012
I could really picture the room, your descriptions were great. The names are amazing, I love weird and unique names in a story because it shows you put some thought into it. This sounds really original, and a good read:)
Somnos Somnos Jul 30, 2012
@KennyNL I am glad you enjoyed it and hope you do continue reading!
KennyNL KennyNL Jul 30, 2012
This is really different and interesting... I love it! The names are awesome too. I love different and strange names. :) Your description of the room was good. I'll continue you this when I finish the rest, but I WILL continue it! :)
dreamernow31 dreamernow31 Jul 30, 2012
I love scenes where a mysteriously cloaked guy is standing on a high place! :D I really like this! Great job! :)
apples-strawberry apples-strawberry Jul 30, 2012
A very good job first off i must say at catching the readers attention!! A very good detailed scene! Loved it :) 
                              
                              You have made me incredibly curious to read on and find out what happens :D Overall this was a nice, easy and very enjoyable read so far!! Voted!! Keep up the good work :)