This is my first story so PLZ don't judge if it's super crappy and I'm doing this on my computer now......And this contains mpreg
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW!! I can just se the cuteness eroding off this chapter! X3 (But the cute hasn't even begun yet! '3 )
I think is a very good start. So don't let your self down, well done for having the well to start a story and that's good enough for me to know you are trying your best.
I never have the well to try and write my one story.
Good job for your first fic, I'd maybe make it a little bit longer but do what you can, I tried to write a fanfiction once and I was so brutal and cringy that we never speak of it.
So yours is brilliant :)