Soumako: Family ( Completed)

Soumako: Family ( Completed)

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Makayla Daniels By Yaoiloverchick468 Completed

This is my first story so PLZ don't judge if it's super crappy and I'm doing this on my computer now......And this contains mpreg

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW!! I can just se the cuteness eroding off this chapter! X3 (But the cute hasn't even begun yet! '3 )
I think is a very good start. So don't let your self down, well done for having the well to start a story and that's good enough for me to know you are  trying your best.
                               I never have the well to try and write my one story.
Good job for your first fic, I'd maybe make it a little bit longer but do what you can, I tried to write a fanfiction once and I was so brutal and cringy that we never speak of it.
                              
                              So yours is brilliant :)