The New Girl

The New Girl

9.9K Reads 211 Votes 8 Part Story
Jessica By Jessthekarategirl Updated Oct 17

Kims the new girl in Seaford. Here she meets Eddie, Milton, Jerry, Julie, Rudy, Jack and many more! Will her and jack go out? (Hint: Kick) I suck at summerys the story is better you have to read it tell me what you think.

laritie7 laritie7 Nov 19, 2014
you should stop starting every sentence with then....you should try to start them with different words...i don't want to be rude or anything just trying to help you (the story is amazing by the way)
newsboyslover777 newsboyslover777 Dec 24, 2013
Please work on ur story no detail no grammar very hard to understand read mine and get ideas
Jessthekarategirl Jessthekarategirl May 30, 2013
@megadoodle16 thanks and i will be updating soon i'm just really busy in school right now
Jessthekarategirl Jessthekarategirl May 25, 2013
@PurpleHairIsAwesome Ya i know about the switching in P.O.V. thing i also post on another site so i'm just adding my writing on here i fixed that in chapter 3 so in chapter 2 i belive it does that too so ya! But thanks And it will be pretty funny later on