Kims the new girl in Seaford. Here she meets Eddie, Milton, Jerry, Julie, Rudy, Jack and many more! Will her and jack go out? (Hint: Kick) I suck at summerys the story is better you have to read it tell me what you think.
you should stop starting every sentence with then....you should try to start them with different words...i don't want to be rude or anything just trying to help you (the story is amazing by the way)
Please work on ur story no detail no grammar very hard to understand read mine and get ideas
@megadoodle16 thanks and i will be updating soon i'm just really busy in school right now
@PurpleHairIsAwesome Ya i know about the switching in P.O.V. thing i also post on another site so i'm just adding my writing on here i fixed that in chapter 3 so in chapter 2 i belive it does that too so ya! But thanks And it will be pretty funny later on