An Unspoken Heart

An Unspoken Heart

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Amber By amberkat2499 Updated Nov 25

[Ongoing]
Zoha's life has been weaved with tragical fate. Her parents died in a tragic car crash, when she was four. Her Dadi, or grandma, raised her with relentless love and care. She bloomed into an ambitious girl, studying to become an architect. Opposite of her was her cousin, Manal, daughter of her Zafar uncle, who lived in California, owning a restaurant. Manal always resented Zoha since the time she was really little. She is a conceited, spoiled girl, always proving to be better than Zoha in every aspect.

One day when Dadi leaves her too, Zoha feels she is forever left alone. There is no one who is close to her as her Dadi was. She feels weak and discouraged without support. And as much she tried to come out of the grief of loss, Manal's enmity intensifies and she has planned to kick her out of the house, by taunting and demeaning her self-esteem. But Manal's brother Shehryaar who comes to Pakistan from California, is a generous, kind boy. He treats Zoha rather warmly. 

When Manal pressurizes Zoha to leave her house, because she stands as a problem to her, Zoha is all broken from inside. She can't move away from a house in which she grew up. She has memories of her childhood with dadi there. She doesn't realize when Manal's hate is that strong to throw her out of the house, so there is a strong pull of Shehryaar's kindness and love that keeps bringing her back. 


This is totally a work of fiction, and it would be a coincidence if anything resembles the dead or alive, like the characters, plot and the entire concept. It does not contain anything inappropriate.
Enjoy and consider giving the chapters a vote, along with leaving any comments. It's a story with a lot of meaning, as you understand the characters. 
Also I am more focused on writing the chapter and do some editing before I post the chapters. If editing is bothering you a lot then let me know, otherwise keep reading. I will take care of that as I am done with the whole story.

Muheenat_ Muheenat_ Sep 10
can't wait to start reading this Story about an ambitious architect like me :)!
fatimaarooj fatimaarooj Sep 25
and may be that dream means... that in the near future there will be some who will always be by your side and take care of u not even letting u know...
Its very engaging
                              I didnt even realise when i got to the end.i could imagine myself in their world with all the feels, emotions.. Ur descriptions r 👍👍 top-notch
                              I will only critique the editing, i spotted a few errors that can be easily corrected
                              All in all.. It is a very nice chapter
Ooo this gave me the poem vibes if you know what I mean 😃
ainu_kawal ainu_kawal Oct 10
Amazing chappy... The luv btw dadi and her is written so sweetlyy😍😊
Gurl im jealous now please sit in my English lang exam u would get an a star i swear it test ur writing skill and u will nail it Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee