His Huntress

His Huntress

9.5K Reads 354 Votes 7 Part Story
Denver By HunterAxel Completed

New 2016 wattpad story:
Vanessa's a fearsome young huntress that hunts the supernatural and rid the world of their evil by killing them. She was like any ordinary girl when she grew up in her all American white picket fence. But that all changed when her father died at the claws of an Alpha werewolf. After learning about the supernatural the Stark siblings became hunters.

Her siblings wanted to give up hunting. Vanessa didn't mind because hunting bought her peace. It gave her structure and routine.
Still attending highschool she looked nothing like the fighting machine she became after dark, she was plain invisible but she liked it that way.

Then she saw him he was like no other guy she's met. The way he walked talked just captured her full attention. She felt things...

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"Vanessa I'm not what you think I am." But still her brain couldn't make the connection. "Look at me please?" She whispered hand on his back. And when he did she gasped. NO...

  • action
  • alpha
  • fantasy
  • highschool
  • hunter
  • huntress
  • love
  • mates
  • newadult
  • romance
  • suspense
  • teenfiction
  • urban
  • vampire
  • werewolf
  • werewolves
MarvelousMaReesha MarvelousMaReesha Nov 28, 2016
This is a great start.  Although you do need to split your paragraphs up.
micah-dunham micah-dunham Mar 07, 2016
it's hard to read due to the bad punctuation, but I think it's a good story so far.
MarvelousMaReesha MarvelousMaReesha Nov 28, 2016
Trees were pass by (I don't  think you mean to have the were there. )
PokeFam123 PokeFam123 Jan 31, 2016
This is some constructive criticism. Please remember to spell you as you and not as u.
HunterAxel HunterAxel Jan 04, 2016
I will try to update as soon as possible next to HB and this one which im focusing on thanks for voting