His Huntress

His Huntress

14.5K Reads 515 Votes 7 Part Story
Denver By HunterAxel Completed

New 2016 wattpad story:
Vanessa's a fearsome young huntress that hunts the supernatural and rid the world of their evil by killing them. She was like any ordinary girl when she grew up in her all American white picket fence. But that all changed when her father died at the claws of an Alpha werewolf. After learning about the supernatural the Stark siblings became hunters.

Her siblings wanted to give up hunting. Vanessa didn't mind because hunting bought her peace. It gave her structure and routine.
Still attending highschool she looked nothing like the fighting machine she became after dark, she was plain invisible but she liked it that way.

Then she saw him he was like no other guy she's met. The way he walked talked just captured her full attention. She felt things...


"Vanessa I'm not what you think I am." But still her brain couldn't make the connection. "Look at me please?" She whispered hand on his back. And when he did she gasped. NO...

  • action
  • alpha
  • fantasy
  • highschool
  • hunter
  • huntress
  • love
  • mates
  • newadult
  • romance
  • suspense
  • teenfiction
  • urban
  • vampire
  • werewolf
  • werewolves
Then I guess Im not normal. The last time someone pranked me like that I attacked him. My instincts make me defend. 😂
Skyridden Skyridden Jun 22
I’m feeling like a genius right now, but I’m probably wrong. What if she used silver bullets with wood tips or vice versa so she wouldn’t have to change them 🤯
MarvelousMaReesha MarvelousMaReesha Nov 28, 2016
This is a great start.  Although you do need to split your paragraphs up.
micah-dunham micah-dunham Mar 07, 2016
it's hard to read due to the bad punctuation, but I think it's a good story so far.
MarvelousMaReesha MarvelousMaReesha Nov 28, 2016
Trees were pass by (I don't  think you mean to have the were there. )
PokeFam123 PokeFam123 Jan 31, 2016
This is some constructive criticism. Please remember to spell you as you and not as u.