Torn (Life, Love and Death)

Torn (Life, Love and Death)

692 Reads 20 Votes 6 Part Story
Misanthropic By ChinaValkyrie Updated Oct 31, 2011

Asherine Cinders spent 3 centuries in Hell, only before that she was an angel. bored of torturing the same people she goes to the human dimension, enrolling in high school. Her boyfriend from Hell, Blaine, follows her and they spend their weeks street racing, fighting, causing mayhem and learning. That all changes when Blaine's twin brother comes. Unlike Blaine, he works for God, or Zeus. Has he been sent to bring her back, or is it something much darker? When she suddenly disappears Blaine expects the worst, especially when Kael doesnt turn up either. He searches for them, and what he finds chills him from the core. What happened to her?

ChinaValkyrie ChinaValkyrie Mar 24, 2011
@shelbylw03 yeah!! that storie awesome!! if there are uncapitalized I's that'll be where i wrote it on here and not on word lol
                              
                              thanks for the comment :)
shelbylw03 shelbylw03 Mar 24, 2011
Still a great story.  I like the twin idea a lot.  Off to the rest. 
shelbylw03 shelbylw03 Mar 24, 2011
I loved it!  There were a couple times when you didn't capatlize I, but that's it.  And is Mads Maddison from that one story I can't exactly remember the name of it, but she was a racer.  Any who, I'm definitely off to the next chapter.