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twilight (a rosalie hale love story)

twilight (a rosalie hale love story)

21.2K Reads 430 Votes 13 Part Story
Lucy By sandlot123 Completed

what if Bella had a sister who is older. her name, Nina swan. when Bella and Nina move to forks Washington to spend time with their dad they meet old friends and new ones and relationships will happen with the people they least expect. Nina is 18 and Bella is 17.

this story is just for fun....

- - Apr 29, 2016
I like the plot so far. Honestly, it is rushed and needs a lot of editing. The paragraphs could be split up to make it easier to read and capitalization and punctuation can be improved.