Comments and votes are greatly appreciated ! An constructive criticism is welcomed.
p.s does anybody know how to add a youtube video since i want to add the song that was stuck in my head while writing this
i love it. it's very detailed and deep. please keep write poems. ur a very passionate writer.
This is realy pretty.
and very true,
it made me think xD
omg! this is so pretty .. it's true a relationship is like a flower ...
Wow. I was seeing three things when I read that. One was the actual rose, withering. The next was the relationship dying slowly. Then a person, a cruel one, watching over it with a grin, occasionally interfering.