Winter Rose

Winter Rose

368 Reads 8 Votes 1 Part Story
dead_girl By dead_girl Completed

Comments and votes are greatly appreciated ! An constructive criticism is welcomed. 

p.s does anybody know how to add a youtube video since i want to add the song that was stuck in my head while writing this

ghost_girl ghost_girl Feb 27, 2011
i love it. it's very detailed and deep. please keep write poems. ur a very passionate writer.
DreadfulLullaby DreadfulLullaby Nov 28, 2010
This is realy pretty. 
                              and very true, 
                              it made me think xD 
sceline sceline Nov 17, 2010
omg! this is so pretty .. it's true a relationship is like a flower ...
raquel104 raquel104 Oct 31, 2010
Wow. I was seeing three things when I read that. One was the actual rose, withering. The next was the relationship dying slowly. Then a person, a cruel one, watching over it with a grin, occasionally interfering.