Merry Go Round

Merry Go Round

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CantHandleMissingYou By gabbyalex Updated Oct 31, 2010

Love Poem.  Thanks to everyone who's reading. .  It really makes me smile. I was worried about posting this, but thanks for the love. Please leave a comment, and vote if you like. <<<333

SilentDream SilentDream Oct 12, 2011
Honestly, the beginning was a little slow and kind of hard to understand, but as I read on everything started to make sense then it was like everything was happening /to/ me! It was crazy! But it was so breathtakingly beautiful ♥
                              
                              P.S. Got my good comment in!
Deep4141 Deep4141 Dec 20, 2010
A fantastic story of love in poetic detail ! Well done !  =]
killtheinnocents killtheinnocents Dec 18, 2010
its really good.. . the way u write it.. its really beautiful..
Calypso61 Calypso61 Dec 18, 2010
This is the most amazing and beautiful poem I have ever read. You have a great talent there, never let anyone tell you otherwise!! That's an order! You'll go far someday ;)
AliceGraivenille AliceGraivenille Dec 13, 2010
So voted!
                              You know what I like the most in your poems? Well, it's what you're feeling after you're done reading them! There's so much emotion in them.... 
                              Lucky you, after all, you got the "Best Man ever" ;)
itsmelawrrence itsmelawrrence Dec 13, 2010
this is reeeeeeeeeeallllly gooooooooooodd. im really a fan of yours. :D