Disaster-in-Waiting

Disaster-in-Waiting

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ElleMThomas By ElleMThomas Completed

Disaster-in-Waiting will be published on Amazon Kindle in February 2017 and as such will no longer be available on here in full. I will be leaving the first three chapters here in full as a sample of the completed book but all other chapters will be removed from 21st January beginning with Chapter Four. I apologise if this upsets anyone but I have tried to advise people as they have added it to their reading lists or begun to vote on it and have held back from removing to allow a number of readers to complete the story.

****Mature audience only due to adult themes; sex, language and situations****
  
  Eloise Ross is married to Michael, her much older and recently retired husband. He fills his days with golf and walking the dog, while she fills her days working as a newly appointed P.A. to the CEO of an international company.
  
  One night, disillusioned with her sexless marriage she goes out alone, drinks beer and dances with a handsome stranger. The moves on the dance floor quickly lead to passion and excitement like El has never known, but it was only one night, one time. Just that once couldn't mean anything, could it?
  
  Just that once changed her view on everything she'd ever thought she'd known or valued; her home, family, husband and marriage, but most of all herself.
  
  As her life begins to unravel, with twists and turns that make her laugh, cry and despair El has only one constant to hang onto, her handsome stranger.
  
  "Because I don't want to end it. I'm not exactly what you'd call experienced," I said with a warm flush creeping up my cheeks. "I thought everything I had, with Michael was an ideal life until that night, when I met you and something switched inside me, a realisation that it was as far from ideal as anything  ever could be. I don't think I'm being clear here, sorry. I am not trying to pin my happiness or the consequences of this on you, God, I don't even call you by your first name so to expect anything of you is not realistic!"

SachaAnnSmith SachaAnnSmith Dec 05, 2016
Oh my word that is so funny. I have an idea I would do the exact same thing if I answered a message that was stated in that way. Lol that's so funny.
AnkhGoddess AnkhGoddess Aug 11, 2016
Interesting idea. I like that you added older characters in this, there's not that many stories on wattpad that features older characters as one of their main characters.
charlottehope23 charlottehope23 Sep 06, 2016
Your sentences flow amazingly and this is refreshing to read a story on Wattpad with older characters. Only tiny criticism would be to shorten your paragraphs slightly but overall great start!! ❤️
Rebecca-Jade Rebecca-Jade Sep 13, 2016
Ohhhh, I can't tell if this is sexy angry or just angry angry!! 😂😏
justuseurimagination justuseurimagination Dec 21, 2016
the email interaction was so funny.I feel sorry for her and her marriage
DarrenDean1 DarrenDean1 Sep 13, 2016
Cool first chapter, I really like that you use the long chapter format.