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Red BxB ~ Rewritten

Red BxB ~ Rewritten

41.2K Reads 3.2K Votes 14 Part Story
BeAuthentic By BeAuthentic Updated Dec 23, 2016

Have you ever heard Little Red Riding Hood?

Well, what if I were to tell you everything you heard isn't true?

Red isn't an innocent little girl. Red is the second most powerful vampire in the Supernatural world. But ...at the time of the making of this tale, Red was very naive. His nativity ended up being his greatest weakness. He was tricked into giving his freedom to a cunning werewolf.

One thousand years later, Red has finally obtained his freedom and has his mind set on revenge. Revenge not only on werewolves for always seemingly so happy that his pride was in ashes, but also on his own people for abandoning him without a second thought.

Only one thing can stop him from causing ripples in the Supernatural world.

His very own Alpha mate.


If this sounds familiar, I hope you give this another shot. This time around; I feel will be much better.

Charliewrites0 Charliewrites0 Jun 07, 2016
This chapter really hooked me from the start, I love the intensity and from what I've read it's going to be an incredible plot. Well done!
SMILEBIGxD SMILEBIGxD Feb 16
This sentence is beautiful, gorgeous, difinitly a good star sentence
sernaj98 sernaj98 Aug 24, 2016
Noooooo, epilogues are never good (at least all the ones I've read and trust me there have been a lot) plus I've read book that had prologues and no epilogues so yeaaah
Netshaly Netshaly Jun 03, 2016
Not bad, you have a good voice going on there. I would suggest that you check your grammar, and slightly your wording in some occasions. Other than that its pretty good.
Charliewrites0 Charliewrites0 Jun 07, 2016
I'm so excited I get to review this book! *jumps up and down*
AraRose919 AraRose919 Jun 23, 2016
This is a really good chapter. The wording and your grammar are decent. You also have a good hook on readers with the interesting first chapter.