Hes a vampire

Hes a vampire

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tsheldrick By tsheldrick Completed

She is a regular teenage girl until she meets RJ but how does she know what he is when he did not tell her? Find out in the book!:)

  • idk
  • kidnapping
  • others
  • romance
  • vampire
I know this comment is late, but maybe use more grammar and punctuation because it was kind of difficult to read and it all went in a jumble. What what was his name? What was she thinking about when he was asking her? What was he wearing? Like it needed to be more detailed.
isabeau777 isabeau777 Sep 27, 2017
Why would she go with three random guys to the movies? They might not even be going to the theatre.
tsheldrick tsheldrick Jan 20
I wrote this book when I was about 13 and now I am 17 thank you so much for reading my books I might be updating some of my books soon and also I am going to have my friend edit some things
ShyNightSky ShyNightSky Sep 04, 2017
Wow. That's easy going. And where the hell is the dialog? 😂😂😂
PeanutButter_Kisses PeanutButter_Kisses Sep 29, 2013
It's not TOO bad but it does need some work, you or a friend should reread the actually words you wrote instead of reading what You want it to say. I do that all the time, but Hey we're only human.
ONLY1NYKIA ONLY1NYKIA Jul 22, 2013
wow it is really good I was wrong I should of read it from the beginning im so  so  so  sorry