{{The Regret}}

{{The Regret}}

27.9K Reads 1.1K Votes 17 Part Story
''f...k off" By shygirl2345 Updated Oct 13, 2016

Do you know how its feel to see your bestfriend and crush to betray you treating you like trash for a girl that 
hates you.......

naruto uzumaki has to go through that seeing his bestfriend and his crush walk out of his life for someone stupid

Will naruto save his crush or will he let sasuke feel the regret......

Mitzomii_Uzumaki Mitzomii_Uzumaki Dec 27, 2016
This story has potential. The plot is great but these grammar mistakes are killing me. The struggle is real.
ThePied_Piper ThePied_Piper Oct 13, 2016
At this point, I don't even understand what's being written. Also, use more periods, these run-on sentences are killing me.
ThePied_Piper ThePied_Piper Oct 13, 2016
The headache is real. Take this story down and learn to write, omg.
Kcrocks1987 Kcrocks1987 Oct 06, 2016
Wait hold on if he went to the restroom why the fuk is sakura spying in the guys room?!
Mitzomii_Uzumaki Mitzomii_Uzumaki Dec 27, 2016
The glasses give off the, "sexy nerd", vibe. My god yes. I hope for some smex.
KeliUzumaki KeliUzumaki Nov 01, 2016
Same here I am not trying to puke and poor little naruto I feel bad 😔