Georgia, a typical teen until her mother develops breast cancer. She somehow escapes her horrid reality and calls upon her magical, made up world from her pleasant childhood to help herself mentally through this tough time.
I love this chapter. I really enjoy the fact it is written from the point of view of a five year old because not many stories give you the opportunity to experience that. It has already drawn me in!
@scattering-memories thank you, i'm so glad that it sounds from a 5 year old's pov - it's quite hard to capture their essence
This was a very sweet and unique chapter - from the five year old's POV. <:
I love it, short and simple. Don't reveal too much, (I am totally against Random-SinoSaur :X), this makes it more unique. <:
@chatt3rb0x@DreamHeart @gabismile thanks
@I_am_enigma @Random-DinoSaur ok i'll try that :)
I really think this is a chapter at all. It needs more description because I have no idea whats even going on. you need a blurb. there wasn't much to comment on.voted