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Hit By Fate

Hit By Fate

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RoseStoleMyNose By RoseStoleMyNose Completed

{This book is kept only for nostalgic purposes. Many grammatical errors and story potholes. Warning.}    When you hear the words Hit By Fate what do you think? Do you think about the cliche run in at a coffee shop spilling your coffees over each other and then instantly fall in love and life ends up being a love story? Well that's not what happens. In this case Hit By Fate involves a car.

When a driver named Eric and a pedestrian named Mattie aren't paying attention their fates intertwine and first impressions are made. A friendship forms but add a ex-boyfriend, family, and drama, and a lot can happen and will.

XxFacingRealityxX XxFacingRealityxX Jul 08, 2014
Like it so far. Can't wait to find out what happens next. :)
refractedPenguin refractedPenguin Jul 02, 2014's food...*stares longingly at ice cream* you could just break up with him AFTER the meal!
RoseStoleMyNose RoseStoleMyNose Sep 13, 2013
@PrissyWiss :) ya! That was my Mom until she ran out of episodes on Netflix!
xElenaMaex xElenaMaex Sep 11, 2013
Really good start! There are a few spelling mistakes but meh no ones perfect :) I like it so far
RuthieKnox RuthieKnox Sep 06, 2013
This is a great premise! I'd encourage you to let the dialog do more work for you -- let it reveal your characters' personalities, rather than showing us so much of what they're thinking. A lot of thinking slows down the story pacing.
                              Great work!
kpgcatlover kpgcatlover Jul 14, 2013
I already love this book!! :D The ending seriously had me gasp in shock!