The Apprentice ➳ Kylo Ren

The Apprentice ➳ Kylo Ren

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Lizzie By beautiful-crimes Updated Nov 25

"You can feel it, can't you?" 
    Jana felt his icy lips against her ear as he whispered the words. 
    "You can feel the Dark Side calling to you. Just like it did on the day I found you." 
    "You mean the day you kidnaped me," Jana snapped back, ignoring the shuddering sensations rippling through her body at his touch. 
    Ren laughed, quiet, deep, and dark. "Ever the one to fight back. But you don't have to. Give into the Dark Side, Jana. Join me..." 

{Star Wars: The Force Awakens®
elizabeth bane™ | 2016}

For future reference, Teedo is a species and he's riding a Luggabeast. It's an animal whose mask and such is permanently fused to its face; not a robot.
Okay, so I'm guessing your going on the Kylo and Rey aren't related? Because if Rey and Jana are twins and if Rey and Kylo turn out to be related, It would be really weird
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Interesting first part. The characters are established beautifully, the plot seems incredibly interesting, and I love your writing. Keep it up
KarilaEdwin KarilaEdwin Jan 25
Oh my gosh! I read the names and I'm shocked! I just started writing a Kylo Ren fanfic and the main character is Jano! 😶 that's so cool! Hugs!
cosmicsky cosmicsky Jan 12
I just finished reading this whole thing and I'm in love with this story!! Great job and I really like Jana's character omg^-^