Kidnapped by a vampire ( #wattys2016)

Kidnapped by a vampire ( #wattys2016)

46.9K Reads 2.1K Votes 28 Part Story
Jess By jess_stories Updated Jun 25

A girl name jade was abused all her life by her father and her mother didn't care about her. So one night things got serious and she ran out of the house on a warm summer night. Little did Jade know that was her last day seeing her parents because when she was walking she felt like something was following her. What will she do to try to get out of this situation?


Cover made by: maplefoot

(Completed)


RANK: #77 as of 7/2/16

( FIRST VAMPIRE STORY I WROTE, I WILL EDIT LATER) 

MAY BE CRAPPY SINCE IT IS MY FIRST STORY I EVER WROTE BUT PLEASE GIVE IT A TRY.
I do not own any of the pictures in this book!! I found them on the Internet.

WHY THE HECK HER PARENTS HATE AND DO THAT TO HER!!! [ I just daydreaming this story as fanfiction of My favorite anime : Owari no Seraph.
LydiaRose15 LydiaRose15 Jul 17
I wear jackets and jeans in summer because A) the weather here is so unpredictable B) every building has AC and they always make it feel like a freezer in there and C) where I'm from, the state bird is the mosquito, I don't feel like getting eaten alive
Please please use quotation marks, good story BUT THE QUOTATION MARKS my eyes hurt. Pretty please.
Yogek011 Yogek011 Apr 03
The story is great 
                              But can u like add the quotation marks when someone is saying something 
                              Coz like without it 
                              It's sorta confusing
I like it but it's a bit to....straight forward......add more details and try to build up suspense
SmallBobInc SmallBobInc Jan 11
So I'm really liking the plotline, but could you add quotation marks when someone is talking? It would make it less confusing :)