Jeopardizing the Election (boyxboy)(Wattys2016)

Jeopardizing the Election (boyxboy)(Wattys2016)

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Violet (Cami) Fern By Lost_Violet Updated Feb 02

17 year old Taylor Fields, the son of the top Republican candidate, can't wait for all the election stress to diminish, can't wait for the election to be over. He desperately wants to enjoy the little that's left of his senior year, as well as patch up his tenuous relationship with his girlfriend. Honestly, he just wants things to go back to normal. 

The last thing that he wants is Wren Sanchez, the son of the top candidate and openly gay "bad boy", transferring to his high school. "Fraternizing with the enemy" shouldn't even be an issue, but it became one when Wren seems to not only take a liking to Taylor, but also begins to openly pursue him. And for some reason Taylor isn't as annoyed about that as he should be..

What could possibly go wrong? 

Critique to @TorissaNikole. PLEASE go check out her stories, she is beautiful and amazing and she's awesome!!

Maybe Katy is supposed to have a different vernacular. But incase she doesn't, it should be: you have got potential.
I'M SO PROUD OF YOU, STRANGER. IT'S GREAT. THE ERRORS ARE FEW AND FAR BETWEEN. BETTER THAN ANY STORY I'VE READ PRIOR. GOOD CONVENTIONS OF STANDARD ENGLISH. YOU'RE DOING GREAT.
MazaDaBunny MazaDaBunny Feb 14
His I quite an interesting idea ^_^
                              I can't believe that he's fine with his dad's refusal to name him though... And I feel like his girlfriend is cheating on him, but I wouldn't blame her considering he seems to think it's all ok that they haven't communicated in so long
Ha! Love the way it just gets right into it :P Honestly tho, it does have pretty good potential even though I don't really like this genre. You have a great writing style which is rare to find these days and a natural flow with dialogues and description. Keep doing your thing and all the best!
_brebear_ _brebear_ Mar 02
Better mean that as a joke lol. Women don't like being called crazy ^_^
Maybe remove the now and only put it in once. Seems repetitive. :)