Hidden Princess(Unedited)

Hidden Princess(Unedited)

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asatabardo By asatabardo Updated a day ago

Joshua turn to get a closer view of, his stepmother? Can he even call her that she was younger than him! She was staring at him like he was a monster. With those big brown eyes.


Halley was shock to the spine. The man standing in front of her was so handsome! This couldn't be her future husband. 


"I'll like to introduced you to--"


"I know father your wife." Joshua lifted Halley's hand and kiss it gently.


"Nice to meet you lovely lady. I must admit I can't come to call you mother as yet--"

"Joshua! " Lord fisher shouted glaring at his son." She is not my wife ,she is yours." 


Joshua look at his father then Halley with shock expression before throwing his head back and roar with laughter. " father..I thought you weren't one to jest."



Find out what happens next in this twisted tale of love, romance and a bit of humor.


Highest rank #4 in historical fiction

mitz0320 mitz0320 Feb 14
I noticed that u said timothy laughed as he WIPE instead of WIPED I seen it through the first couple paragraphs I just thought I would let you know that u forgot the "ed" on a few words I know its easy to get caught up in writing and not notice. But it sounds good so far.
JennClose JennClose Mar 07
You should really go backed through and fix your tenses. It is a really big issue for me when I read a book things need to flow. I will continue to try reading this though because I think the basis of the story sounds good.
ifyestee ifyestee Mar 08
very interesting, now am curious to know happens next.... nice piece
Ruechari Ruechari Oct 14
She is a hellion😉can't wait to see how she handles this new adventure