What happens when the 4 konohagakure kunochi leave the village will the boys regret it?
What all the other comments said and add a bit more detail and Don’t forget Your Capitals
I think that is one of the hardest things to do is to make Rock Lee a evil character in any of the stories i have ever read I've never found one where he is mean at all.
This is me when someone cuts in the lunch line when I'm Veerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
~100 years later~
It was pretty good, just fix your grammar, punctuation and formating so it will be easier to read
Paragraphs,longer chapters,and Quotation marks,along with Commas with spaces after them execpt after speech
There's a lot of run on sentences. And it would help with quotation marks around who's talking