The 4 konohagakure Missings kunochi

The 4 konohagakure Missings kunochi

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みちすなから By --Naruto-- Completed

What happens when the 4 konohagakure kunochi leave the village will the boys regret it?

This is me when someone cuts in the lunch line when I'm Veerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
                              ~100 years later~
                              rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry hungry
Paragraphs,longer chapters,and Quotation marks,along with Commas with spaces after them execpt after speech
lexi209love lexi209love Apr 03, 2016
There's a lot of run on sentences. And it would help with quotation marks around who's talking
Sakura_Nara_Hyuga Sakura_Nara_Hyuga Jun 11, 2016
I'm reading this again & i just noticed the 1st pic it says Kunicho
WhyCantTheyBeReal_ WhyCantTheyBeReal_ Jul 02, 2016
ummmm... please use these"!"!!!  I can't understand what they're saying!! or at least edit it!!