What happens when the 4 konohagakure kunochi leave the village will the boys regret it?
What all the other comments said and add a bit more detail and Don’t forget Your Capitals
This is me when someone cuts in the lunch line when I'm Veerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
~100 years later~
It was pretty good, just fix your grammar, punctuation and formating so it will be easier to read
Paragraphs,longer chapters,and Quotation marks,along with Commas with spaces after them execpt after speech
Longer chapters please! I WANT MOREEEEEEE~ (Sorry I had to throw that in)
ummmm... please use these"!"!!! I can't understand what they're saying!! or at least edit it!!