The 4 konohagakure Missings kunochi

The 4 konohagakure Missings kunochi

63.3K Reads 2.1K Votes 26 Part Story
みちすなから By --Naruto-- Completed

What happens when the 4 konohagakure kunochi leave the village will the boys regret it?

  • fanfiction
  • hinata
  • ino
  • naruto
  • sakura
  • tenten
ElilneeS ElilneeS Dec 30, 2017
What all the other comments said and add a bit more detail and Don’t forget Your Capitals
JocelynYates JocelynYates Dec 11, 2017
I think that is one of the hardest things to do is to make Rock Lee a evil character in any of the stories i have ever read I've never found one where he is mean at all.
Lazy_Music_Lover Lazy_Music_Lover Apr 14, 2017
This is me when someone cuts in the lunch line when I'm Veerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
                              ~100 years later~
                              rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry hungry
naruhinalover4ever naruhinalover4ever Oct 22, 2017
It was pretty good, just fix your grammar, punctuation and formating so it will be easier to read
Wolflover1018HIATUS Wolflover1018HIATUS Jul 01, 2017
Paragraphs,longer chapters,and Quotation marks,along with Commas with spaces after them execpt after speech
lexi209love lexi209love Apr 03, 2016
There's a lot of run on sentences. And it would help with quotation marks around who's talking