The 4 konohagakure Missings kunochi

The 4 konohagakure Missings kunochi

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みちすなから By --Naruto-- Completed

What happens when the 4 konohagakure kunochi leave the village will the boys regret it?

  • fanfiction
  • hinata
  • ino
  • naruto
  • sakura
  • tenten
This is me when someone cuts in the lunch line when I'm Veerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
                              ~100 years later~
                              rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry hungry
It was pretty good, just fix your grammar, punctuation and formating so it will be easier to read
Paragraphs,longer chapters,and Quotation marks,along with Commas with spaces after them execpt after speech
lexi209love lexi209love Apr 03, 2016
There's a lot of run on sentences. And it would help with quotation marks around who's talking
Sakura_Nara_Hyuga Sakura_Nara_Hyuga Jun 11, 2016
I'm reading this again & i just noticed the 1st pic it says Kunicho
WhyCantTheyBeReal_ WhyCantTheyBeReal_ Jul 02, 2016
ummmm... please use these"!"!!!  I can't understand what they're saying!! or at least edit it!!