In love with my dad's best friend

In love with my dad's best friend

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zeezeeloogie By zeezeeloogie Updated Jul 20

Anna's mom just passed away from cancer now she has to go an live with her dad witch she never met before .To make things worse she meets her dad's super hot and charming bestfriend Jason. Anna soon find herself falling for Jason charms. Will her dad accept their relationship.

Xinny_M Xinny_M Sep 27, 2014
I agree with xiuminlove you need to use the quotation marks xD
deleted_4ever deleted_4ever Oct 20, 2013
Few mistakes and missin the quotes sign " but otherwisits amazing
TrackGoHard101 TrackGoHard101 Sep 23, 2013
Pleez update I neeeeeed 2 no wat is gonna happen next ur gonna make me scream!!! :( :< Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! SCREAMMMMMMMMMMM!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
                              Oh and u need 2 update now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RubiesInsideRocks RubiesInsideRocks Aug 22, 2013
This is good so far but I think u need to edit ur work,proof read,and try to use paragraphs and punctuation,otherwise I think you are okay. ◕‿◕
dylan_kriz dylan_kriz Aug 18, 2013
You should keep writing and don\'t forget to put quotation marks around the words like \"hi how are you?\"