The Girl in the Window

The Girl in the Window

57.2K Reads 3.3K Votes 15 Part Story
Emilee Harvey By uzuriupendo Completed

Athena Pierce loves to explore old abandoned buildings, so when she gets a chance to check out the abandoned Sarton Asylum she takes it. What she doesn't know is that a little girl name Effie Richmond still lives there with a horrible past and secret.
  
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  • asylum
  • child
  • craziness
  • creepy
  • death
  • england
  • hospital
  • insane
  • madness
  • mental
  • murder
  • mystery
  • myyouth
  • paranormal
  • psychological
  • psychologicalhorror
  • scary
  • supernatural
  • the2017awards
  • wattys2017
-PerpetualStardust- -PerpetualStardust- Jun 11, 2017
Why is she scared if she's already went into a haunted place before? Just curious 😊
ExpeliamusMuggle ExpeliamusMuggle Apr 08, 2017
Your concept for the story sounds interesting and a bit different from the rest of the stories on here. I do think that you can work a bit on the flow of the dialogue and the way that you are describing everything that is taking place, but overall it is a good start!
yutta-hey yutta-hey Jan 10, 2017
I love it so far but a few places were a bit...drawn out even though it was only a simple action.
                              
                              Still, overall it was a good chapter.
Jacklyn Jacklyn Feb 27, 2017
That would be a clue for me NOT to want to go. I hate anything haunted and believe in spirits
day_dreamer707 day_dreamer707 Feb 21, 2017
seriously though, y do dogs always die in horror stuff? 😯
_BrendonxUrie_ _BrendonxUrie_ Jan 30, 2017
Oh my god I'm so dumb at first I thought it said satan wrap, I was so confused