The Girl in the Window | The 2017 Awards

The Girl in the Window | The 2017 Awards

45.3K Reads 2.7K Votes 15 Part Story
Emilee Harvey By uzuriupendo Completed

Athena Pierce loves to explore old abandoned buildings, so when she gets a chance to check out the abandoned Sarton Asylum she takes it. What she doesn't know is that a little girl name Effie Richmond still lives there with a horrible past and secret.
  
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  Amazing cover by PiratesandWizards

-astraeus- -astraeus- Jan 10
I love it so far but a few places were a bit...drawn out even though it was only a simple action.
                              
                              Still, overall it was a good chapter.
Breaking_bad87 Breaking_bad87 Oct 27, 2016
The "how are you" is too common. Used almost everyday. Would be good enough as "Mr. Schneider?"
Katesummers2 Katesummers2 Sep 29, 2016
Wtf there are 2 science teachers that are good friends in my school with the last names Schneider and Pierce thats so weird.
aishathsuman aishathsuman 3 days ago
seriously though, y do dogs always die in horror stuff? 😯
Oh my god I'm so dumb at first I thought it said satan wrap, I was so confused
_Blood_Rose _Blood_Rose Sep 29, 2016
I really like the suspense and build up (I mean it's small, but good) I admit I'm a little afraid for Athena but I need to read more! Onto the next part :)