X, Y & Z

X, Y & Z

348K Reads 7.5K Votes 36 Part Story
Liz By lovelynerdyathlete97 Completed

'I wanted to feel guilty for crying in my sister's fiancee's arms.'                                                                                                                            'I wanted to feel guilty for finding comfort in his warm arms.'                                                'I wanted to, but I just didn't.'                                                                                  Zoe Anderson is a girl who likes simplicity and her sister, Ava, is just the opposite. When her sister unexpectedly tells her that she will be leaving the country for 6 months and wants her fiancee, Xavier, to stay with her because their house will be undergoing renovations for the 6 months she's gone, she's shocked. Being the nice sister she is, she allows it. With an insistent ex boyfriend, and life's unpredictable ways, what happens between Zoe and Xavier?

I love the writing, but wish the abuse story line didn't happen so early and abruptly.
tata3319 tata3319 Feb 28
The start was perfect. Not too long but filled with substance.
Just an FYI, it's "fiancé" when it's a boy. "Fiancée" is for a girl. :)
Naomi: Really baby, and u have a fiancée? 
                              I could accept the hospital caring but endearments....nuhuh and plus its just the 2nd chapter not 20th or 30th..
                              Xavier: Ok ok, fine!
                              Zoe: 😶
Sinny_Shrivi Sinny_Shrivi Dec 24, 2013
great start!
                              I just cant wait to complete this :) 
                              Thank you...
darmisha darmisha Jul 29, 2013
I love this story.. your a great writer. I can't wait to read nore of your work.