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Winter Rose

Winter Rose

17.2K Reads 2.2K Votes 35 Part Story
A.M. HIGHT By Scarletletterheart Completed

"We all have good and bad inside of us. It's what side we chose to follow that defines who we really are." -J.K. Rowling.  

A girl, two dogs, and one gallant sparrow-an epic battle against good and evil. 

Everything is at stake when Sheldon's spirit is thrown into his past, in the form of a dog. Charged with a mission to change a series of dark events-all of which have been erased from his memory-Sheldon navigates the mysterious happenings on Rose Family Animal Refuge.   

Currently on Mystery/Thriller's Paranormal Thriller Reading List  
Highest Rank-  45 in Mystery/Thriller 6/2/16 -Completed
  
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My amazing cover was made by Stefanie Saw @seventhstar

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                              Nice prologue. It's sets up the story and I didn't find any grammar mistakes.  It's shorter than the one I have, but it's great.
kacummins kacummins Apr 01
What an interesting story line! This sounds like it will be a fun tale to read.  The prologue feels more like a synopses.  It would be great to be dropped into some action to get a better sense of the situation the character is describing.
RainerSalt RainerSalt May 09
Wow, what a neat start. I can only join in with the others. Wonderful for all the reasons stated here. It definitely makes me want to read more.
I loved the prologue as it already has me interested in the story :) I think this hooks the reader and has them diving right into the first chapter. I loved it so far :)
A very good line to start with!! It has me interested in the story already
Thanks for that insight. I recently changed the blurb it's great to have feedback