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Discarded Hearts

Discarded Hearts

1.2K Reads 40 Votes 3 Part Story
Fee By KookyKlouds Updated Nov 06, 2010

Aislinn is a dreamer. She dreams of love, she dreams of freedom and she dreams of music. But her reality is a harsh one. Forced to pay off her deceased fathers debts and living in a place that can only be called a dump, she makes the best of what she has. One day her life changes in such a way that she could have never imagined. Not even in her wildest dreams.

__Peaches __Peaches Aug 20, 2011
It sounds like a very interesting plot, unique yet original. I am definitely going to read on. It is a shame that she has been left to pay of her father's debts. Not the best parting gift . . .
kraZyMidNigHt kraZyMidNigHt Nov 12, 2010
unusual yet interesting!!
                              i`ll keep on reading... and deserves a vote..
EyExplod EyExplod Nov 06, 2010
Interesting storyline...really enjoyed the short but hilarious description u put in of Gabriel. Good job.
KookyKlouds KookyKlouds Nov 02, 2010
@ferosh @liliancarmine @favfantasy @NAMI1313 @EmilyMarieRadke @I-ate-Narnia @bloodsanity @BlondFangs : I just realised that it was rude that i didn't thank you for taking the time to read and comment (maybe even vote) THANK YOU!!!!  *Hands out lolipops* :P
I-ate-Narnia I-ate-Narnia Nov 01, 2010
Hey, thought I'd check out your story :) 
                              This sounds great, you've got a great style with lots of description.  
SmileMyLove SmileMyLove Oct 29, 2010
It's well written and looks promising, but since it's a bit short I'm not sure what to think. I hope the next part will be longer and explain more about why she's having to pay her father's debt and maybe why he was in debt?
                              I'd love to read more of this though, looks interesting.