Chaos Theory

Chaos Theory

84.5K Reads 3.2K Votes 14 Part Story
frey By menderling Updated 4 days ago

Every sixteen-year-old was bound to have a Mark on their wrist given to them by the Council. The Marks show their fates and what they would become in the future. On the day of the Ceremony, Perrie Harper received her Mark... and it changed everything.

[highest ranking: #45]

  • action
  • dystopian
  • fates
  • marks
  • scifi
  • writteninaction
  • youngadult
AmeriyaeInez AmeriyaeInez Jul 25, 2017
Great hook😊 but you should change the word will to would because its a word used for pass tense as is the word Knew which is already in the sentence.😁
charlie_reads22 charlie_reads22 Apr 19, 2017
Wait, that means her mum was 20 when she left. How old was Perrie (think that is her name) and how old was her mum and dad when she was born then?
AChickenBookie AChickenBookie Aug 27, 2017
REVOLUTION SYMBOL! I mean she already dislikes how her world works and she said marks control your destiny.
NHeartless NHeartless Jun 17, 2017
Very interesting concept! 😆 I think maybe an unknown symbol yet to be discovered? Or also another murder symbol?
drtardisong drtardisong Jan 13, 2017
instead of unlock, reveal (or insert some other synonym) might be better tbh.
fluttr fluttr Jun 24, 2016
i like this story but i think this chapter seems to move a bit fast, so in the future take some time to develop the setting. pierre goes from the truck to the building to finding out her mark pretty quickly. still a great story though!