Elementalist: The beginning

5 Part Story 515 Reads 25 Votes
Ivory_pen By Ivory_pen Updated 2 years ago
A war without casualties. A forgotten history. A prophecy yet to be fulfilled ~
    
    Follow the lives of four teens as they are forced to uncover the mystery surrounding their pasts in order to protect their future. But with their strange gifts awakening and everyone coming after them, can they come together in time to unravel the truth and prepare themselves for the deadly storm heading their way?
    
    [Long Novel]
Again, another brilliant chapter. I like how your vocabulary is just so diversified; it makes your writing flows very nicely. 
                                    There's just something I'm confused about (apart for the ' ' and the " " but I mentioned it in the previous chapter). 
                                    You introduced a lot of characters, and it's a little difficult to keep up with them all. I don't really know what to tell you about that; I was just mixed up with them all and found it a bit hard to keep up. Sometimes, I didn't know/remember who they were so it made it harder to follow.
                                    Nonetheless, great scene you created. I could picture it in my head like a movie.
Again, another brilliant chapter. I like how your vocabulary is just so diversified; it makes your writing flows very nicely. 
                                    There's just something I'm confused about (apart for the ' ' and the " " but I mentioned it in the previous chapter). 
                                    You introduced a lot of characters, and it's a little difficult to keep up with them all. I don't really know what to tell you about that; I was just mixed up with them all and found it a bit hard to keep up. Sometimes, I didn't know/remember who they were so it made it harder to follow.
                                    Nonetheless, great scene you created. I could picture it in my head like a movie.
Again, another brilliant chapter. I like how your vocabulary is just so diversified; it makes your writing flows very nicely. 
                                    There's just something I'm confused about (apart for the ' ' and the " " but I mentioned it in the previous chapter). 
                                    You introduced a lot of characters, and it's a little difficult to keep up with them all. I don't really know what to tell you about that; I was just mixed up with them all and found it a bit hard to keep up. Sometimes, I didn't know/remember who they were so it made it harder to follow.
                                    Nonetheless, great scene you created. I could picture it in my head like a movie.
Again, another brilliant chapter. I like how your vocabulary is just so diversified; it makes your writing flows very nicely. 
                                    There's just something I'm confused about (apart for the ' ' and the " " but I mentioned it in the previous chapter). 
                                    You introduced a lot of characters, and it's a little difficult to keep up with them all. I don't really know what to tell you about that; I was just mixed up with them all and found it a bit hard to keep up. Sometimes, I didn't know/remember who they were so it made it harder to follow.
                                    Nonetheless, great scene you created. I could picture it in my head like a movie.