Elementalist: The beginning

Elementalist: The beginning

549 Reads 29 Votes 5 Part Story
T.C Williams By Ivory_pen Updated Oct 06, 2013

A war without casualties. A forgotten history. A prophecy yet to be fulfilled ~

Follow the lives of four teens as they are forced to uncover the mystery surrounding their pasts in order to protect their future. But with their strange gifts awakening and everyone coming after them, can they come together in time to unravel the truth and prepare themselves for the deadly storm heading their way?

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JustAnOldVCR JustAnOldVCR Oct 17, 2013
Love it! I'm in love with your beginning. It is just mind blowing. You give vivid descrpitions and its so ell put together. I wish I could write like you! Simply great. That's all I can really say!
Riksta10001 Riksta10001 Oct 04, 2013
Ok so I only have time to skim read this tonight (I will give a full critique tomorrow, time permitting). I just wanted to say I love this so far. You have a great writing style, but there were some minor grammatical flaws which I will go over tomorrow :)
MyztikalTearz MyztikalTearz Jun 22, 2012
This was a very complex prologue. A lot of ingredients for a lengthy novel :)