Elementalist: The beginning

5 Part Story 515 Reads 25 Votes
Ivory_pen By Ivory_pen Updated 2 years ago
A war without casualties. A forgotten history. A prophecy yet to be fulfilled ~
    Follow the lives of four teens as they are forced to uncover the mystery surrounding their pasts in order to protect their future. But with their strange gifts awakening and everyone coming after them, can they come together in time to unravel the truth and prepare themselves for the deadly storm heading their way?
    [Long Novel]
Love it! I'm in love with your beginning. It is just mind blowing. You give vivid descrpitions and its so ell put together. I wish I could write like you! Simply great. That's all I can really say!
Review on the  elementist
                                    Author : @Ivory_pen
                                    Review:The start was excellent. I had a great picture in my mind. Good description of every feeling.  It's not really my type of story which got me a bit bored. 
                                    Will I read:No
Ok so I only have time to skim read this tonight (I will give a full critique tomorrow, time permitting). I just wanted to say I love this so far. You have a great writing style, but there were some minor grammatical flaws which I will go over tomorrow :)
This was a very complex prologue. A lot of ingredients for a lengthy novel :)