Serving Mr Popular

Serving Mr Popular

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cherryworks_ By cherryworks_ Updated Jan 06

"Whatever, I call people as I deem fit," he interjected expressionlessly. Okay, that was insulting - how on earth did the name 'banana girl' suit me? He paused, then added with a smirk, "Or do you prefer 'servant' instead?" 

"What?" I frowned in confusion. "Servant'?"

"Yeah, 'servant'." He cocked his head to one side and stared at me intently. "Do you like that better?" 

"Why on earth would I deserve the term 'servant'?" 

"Isn't it obvious? Your mother's my family's maid, and technically she's my parents' maid, so that makes you, her daughter, my servant," he replied with a shrug. 

What. The. Hell? 

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Riley's been living a life of invisibility her whole school life - and she's been doing an excellent job at that. "Avoid, avoid, avoid" is her life motto for surviving high school, especially when it comes to the most popular kids in school. (Well, excluding that time when she dropped a banana peel on the floor and accidentally tripped the school's most popular girl.) 
But then one day her mother lands a job as a maid of a wealthy family and the two of them move into the house owned by the family. It turns out the son of the family her mother works for is none other than...Austin Hale, the most popular guy in school. 
And that, is when her senior year really begins.

deactivatedforever deactivatedforever Feb 13, 2016
MR. HEMMINGS?!?!!! ARE YOU FÛCKING KIDDING ME?!??!! LUKE HEMMINGS GET OUT OF THIS STORY RIGHT NOW!!!!
thatyellowbch thatyellowbch Jan 31, 2016
There isn't much to improve on TBH, your book is well plotted but I'd put more description :)
The ending made me think of :
                              "Ya know Ya love me, xoxo *whispers* Gossip Girl
blue_wolf03 blue_wolf03 Nov 11, 2016
Lmao my first name is Rachel and my middle name is Nicole XD that's awesome
nkorenica nkorenica May 02, 2016
I LOVE HOW ITS WRITTEN LIKE THEYRE GODS BECAUSE ITS CAPITALISED 😂😂
I would have been like "dis bimbo should have watched wear she was going