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Yes, Master

Yes, Master

104K Reads 2.6K Votes 20 Part Story
Danielle By bellagy419 Completed

In England, Rosalie works as a maid for a high-society family to support her poor family. Treated cruelly by her mistress, Rosalie slaves away day after day, wishing for an easier life.  She is surprised when a way out comes in the form of a proposition from her mistress's handsome son.
(Cover by: @I_heart_u64)

diavela diavela Nov 20, 2016
Finally common sense in these maid stories don't call me master thanks so much it's a releif to not call my boss master
BobbyBananasUnicorn BobbyBananasUnicorn Jul 30, 2016
The Hunger Games! Katniss!  Come on people! It cant just be me!?
diavela diavela Nov 20, 2016
Um ok have you considered te million other jobs that pay better and require no studies
Yaaelz Yaaelz Sep 24, 2013
I love your descriptions and how you weave the setting and emotions throughout the story without pausing. I also like how your characters don't always need to speak to express themselves to one another and i think you're very clever with the way that you write. Really enjoying this story :D
PeppermintMusic PeppermintMusic Aug 08, 2013
This was a great intro. Through just one page, you managed to let the reader know her circumstances, and state her feelings so well. Great job!
                              I don't know if you meant to do that, but in the second paragraph, you have two characters' dialogue in one paragraph. Just fyi.
BookFlower BookFlower Jul 30, 2013
Remember to make a new paragraph for each new person who talks. You still have to work on your paragraphs. This chapter is short but explains enough to keep the reader going.