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The One For Her

The One For Her

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Toni Grace By tonigracey77 Updated Mar 03, 2016

At last, I saw her again. The girl I wanted for so long has turned into a beautiful woman.   But how to make her mine? Completely mine? My name is Alex and this time, I won't let anyone take her away from me. No one, not even she, can stop me.  (Restricted)

RiafoLeem RiafoLeem Feb 28, 2016
Ur writing style is weird but it's really easy to imagine the exact scenes going on. If write in 3rd person it would be even mor better. Just a friendly comment no offense intended and besides i just started reading. :)
NinjaFish99 NinjaFish99 Jan 30, 2014
I really really really hope your still working on this story it's really good so far
bookaholic_rikey bookaholic_rikey Jan 08, 2014
When u uploading the next chapter... I'm new to ur work but I love it
alohajaay alohajaay Jan 06, 2014
Gaaaah , more more ! (: I love Alex already ^.^ So cute , please update xoxoxo
thebowlerinme thebowlerinme Dec 26, 2013
Merry Christmas when are you going to finish this one. hope to get updates soon. this is a nice story
barbie66 barbie66 Dec 25, 2013
merry xmas to you . please update real soon . need more . thank you for starting this story . xoxo