Orphan

Orphan

5.9K Reads 72 Votes 7 Part Story
Adress me as Butterfly By TheButterflyOnFire Updated Jul 21, 2011

Humanity differs from them. They cannot exsist, right? My mind, whats wrong with me? Why are my memories a blur? Is this a dream?

Lizzie use to be a girl stranded on the streets, until a family took her in. Their home is not the normal home, vampires, werewolves, half human creatures live there. In this story Lizzie's memories seem to be very importaint, but if they are, why is it that they are blurred? She sprials through the story, trying to learn, trying to figure out if this is a dream. Whats real to her if all her memories are a bunch of made up lies?

  • bite
  • death
  • family
  • importaint
  • izzie
  • jealousy
  • lizzy
  • love
  • name
  • orphan
  • romance
  • sad
  • sadness
  • scared
  • siblings
  • warmth
EternalAwesome EternalAwesome Dec 29, 2010
DUDE! if ur not gonna continue u'll lose the chance of becoming a popular author on wattpad!
<33 it but frendly suggestion if i may; u mite not want to use the same words for something more than once and if so quite spaced out... idk if ur going use my advice or not but i just hope u will:)
                              
EternalAwesome EternalAwesome Nov 26, 2010
lzzie?  Anyways I love ur story, continue, and btw check out my poems if u want.
                              
EternalAwesome EternalAwesome Nov 26, 2010
gr8, when I read this I thought about the people I see in the street, I just wish I could help them. 
Tillyzipp Tillyzipp Nov 24, 2010
The story sounds realy good please uplode soon can't wait for the 1st chap
SusanGagne SusanGagne Nov 01, 2010
Great read! Very well done.... Love this thank you are a great writer! Keep it up! Love susan.....  I wish to read more of yours..,,