The Deadly Twins

The Deadly Twins

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TaeRain By yram_rain15 Updated Jun 12

They are not one of the wealthiest family in the world...but they have a complete,loving,happy family that everyone would dream on...but because of that incident...everything change...

GretchellPalanas GretchellPalanas 3 days ago
Ang ganda  ng. Prologue .  author. Aabangan Ko .talaga ..2 HANGGANG.     Sa ending wahhaha ...excited ako.  Yeyeyy 😊😊
DDG means Da Death gung-gong hajajahahaha walang Natawa hahaha
_asheVAYNE _asheVAYNE Apr 02
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Namienamix Namienamix Jan 29
The first chapter is great. Nasobrahan lang ng emoticons. Try to remove those masmagiging maganda ang story mo. I'm one of those na gumagamit ng emoticons but narealize ko na ma's maganda nga ng alisin ko. :)
Ey-Dzey Ey-Dzey Feb 05
The prologue is good. Maayos young pagkaka-present... Nakaka-attract ng interest. Be careful nga lang same basic grammar (capitalization and punctuations)
i so love the phrase at the buttom.. hihi tama nga namang wag mag judge ng tao if di nila gaanong kakilala..