A Kiss Under The Mistletoe (#Wattys2016)

A Kiss Under The Mistletoe (#Wattys2016)

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Marianne By MissReadsTooMuch Updated Dec 02

Bibliophile Gwen got kissed under a mistletoe at a Christmas Party. She has no idea who kissed her. That's a good thing because she is willing to forget that it ever happened. It was a humiliating moment for her. She wants to forget about it, however, her school keeps on buzzing who kissed Mary. 

Unfortunately, fate has other plans and that kiss was only the beginning.

Because of forgetting an important envelope in school and trying to get it on a blizzard night, she got snowed in school with a certain someone.


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AlexaaFaith AlexaaFaith Apr 17
This prologue is interesting.  The happenings are well describe but I can see few mistakes in grammar but that's something you can improve tho! Keep it up!
 #EliteClub 
                              That brunette was so mean! It was a pretty hooking prologue. Lol, she took notes about the different places?! I liked the plot so far but there are a few mistakes in grammar which can be corrected pretty easily. Your characterisation is great too. Overall, awesome book :)
Some tense issues and other grammatical errors. Overall really great first chapter.
Nikolean Nikolean May 06
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                              I like Gwen's character already! Her thoughts are interesting and she took notes of places- making it humerous. I also liked the many italicized words used craftily. Wonderful job for your first chapter!
A little short and a few errors in terms of mistakes, but all in all a wonderful introduction to the MC and her book loving ways.
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                              The trailer's very creative. I enjoy the idea of it. And I'm excited to read more.