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Working Class Killer: A McPeterson Mystery

Working Class Killer: A McPeterson Mystery

11K Reads 622 Votes 29 Part Story
Jaleel By thatsmartguy_ Updated 2 days ago

New York City Police Department Detective Mia McPeterson has it all...well almost. A  job she loves, a great partner, loving family, and an amazing boss. The only thing she is missing is someone to come home to after a long day in the precinct. When a serial killer starts to murder working class people in the New York City area, the case is given to Mia and her partner, Debra Hawkins-Carter, with the hope that they will swiftly bring the killer to justice. However after four killings and no leads, the NYPD brass decide it is time to seek the help of an FBI agent, Special Agent Hunter Richmond. Will the new set of eyes help the duo find the killer? Or will Mia's eyes wander from the case to her new colleague?  
  Warning: This story will have contain a low-moderate amount of profanity.

This sounds greatt :) I'm curious to see what's going to happen
RyeLyBarger RyeLyBarger Apr 05
This is a really good start of a story ,keep up the good work !!
I really like your writing voice for Mia, it's serious at times but it's also  funny. Can't wait to read more :D
d0raking d0raking May 11, 2016
Love the first chapter, but I just wanted you to know lacerations are actually cuts...if it was a handprint mark the medical term for it would be contustion! Other than that, great story!
katembo katembo Jun 11, 2016
The book has a good start... It sound interestinggggggg... Am looking forward to read the next chapter.. Best of luckyyyy
linahanson linahanson Apr 13, 2016
I just had a good laugh. Story will contain a low to moderate amount of profanity. Given what is going on this sounds rather restrained!!! XD