Elevator (Completed)

Elevator (Completed)

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Lauren By HemmingsBabyPenguin Completed

Oh people, how you don't know what could happen inside an elevator.

#69 in short story 3/31/16. Please give this book a chonce! (See what I did there?)

You need to work on your grammar and punctuation marks.  Also this looks like a first draft.